ext_19446 ([identity profile] dancingdragon3.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] cog_nomen 2012-06-15 02:19 am (UTC)

Great chapter! I thought Bruce talking to Jarvis was cute, and of course the password was perfect!

Love that you gave Pepper and Bruce a chance to bond. And its in a good place, too, in the story. Very well done with all the quiet talking and emotion. And ending on a cliffhanger of sorts - yay! I'm racing to the next part.

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