Great chapter! I thought Bruce talking to Jarvis was cute, and of course the password was perfect!
Love that you gave Pepper and Bruce a chance to bond. And its in a good place, too, in the story. Very well done with all the quiet talking and emotion. And ending on a cliffhanger of sorts - yay! I'm racing to the next part.
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Date: 15 Jun 2012 02:19 (UTC)Love that you gave Pepper and Bruce a chance to bond. And its in a good place, too, in the story. Very well done with all the quiet talking and emotion. And ending on a cliffhanger of sorts - yay! I'm racing to the next part.