I love how you just open with some sex! I was really surprised, pleasantly so. Also like how you neatly took care of any gay/straight questions right away, making room for the scene to start.
I think what I like about this fic is the quiet, thoughtful tone of it, and they way they banter in such an understated way. And of course how Tony doesn’t even need Bruce to hold his end of the conversation.
But then the talking ends and things get really going! And can I say how happy I am that you are allowing Bruce to enjoy sex?! Not that I have anything against fics where Bruce can’t, but relief is nice. And all I can say about the sex is awesome! Again, I love the characterizations right down to Tony having a weird quirk and Bruce feeling apologetic.
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Date: 1 Jun 2012 05:47 (UTC)I think what I like about this fic is the quiet, thoughtful tone of it, and they way they banter in such an understated way. And of course how Tony doesn’t even need Bruce to hold his end of the conversation.
But then the talking ends and things get really going! And can I say how happy I am that you are allowing Bruce to enjoy sex?! Not that I have anything against fics where Bruce can’t, but relief is nice. And all I can say about the sex is awesome! Again, I love the characterizations right down to Tony having a weird quirk and Bruce feeling apologetic.