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This is the story I christened my journal with a passage from, some long months in the working and reworking. I'm still not sastisfied with it. Originally, I wanted to do a Hein/Aki romance that was good and didn't break either character in some horribly sinful way. Unfortunately, the hatred is so complete and mutual that it is practically impossible to fit them together for anything like the relationship I think they could have were they not bitter enemies on the opposite sides of a moral crusade. There are lines in this that I love, and lines in this that I will always hate. Also, I finally have a text editor with a spellchecker. There was much rejoicing. Anyway, be gentle with this one, folks.

Fandom:Final Fantasy: The Spirits Within
Theme: Repentance
Rating: PG

( Turkeys Drown in the Rain. )